While critiquing the
latest chapter of my book-in-progress, Sunlight,
our writing group got into an interesting conversation (at least I thought so)
about my character Laura. Laura’s a secondary character, and in the timeline of
my story she’s only been around for about 24 hours. The general consensus of
the group seemed to be that although Laura seems like an average/nice/likeable
character, certainly with her real life problems—so far something is missing
about her: Her AWESOMENESS. I tend to agree—but her lack of awesome may be OK—at least for now.
In this early draft of my
book, I’m still getting to know my characters (like Laura), and I know things in her back-story that are awesome but haven’t made it to the page yet. There
are also challenges to come that she’ll have to face that will bring some of
that out. BUT this still raises a more general question—do all characters (even secondary characters) in your story need to be
awesome?
In our group discussion we never
fully defined what “awesome” meant, but for me when I think of awesome characters, my mind immediately
jumps to those with extraordinary, super-abilities or traits: Sherlock Holmes
smart, Superman strong, Buffy’s ability to kick some vampire ass, or Dean
Koontz’s well, odd and supernatural Odd Thomas—characters so full of great
capabilities, contradictions and strengths (or so unusual) that they stand out,
can carry their own story and are easily remembered.
So should every character
in your story be awesome? I think the answer is yes and no. All well written
characters should be unique, should stand out in their own way, ideally they
should be flawed/troubled/complicated enough to seem real. My goal and hope as
a writer is to bring characters to life that people care about, want to hang
out with, spend time with maybe even think about and remember after the story
is over. But I think there is a character type in literature and film that
somewhat defies the idea of the “awesome” character.
The Everyman.
The “Everyman” is a somewhat
generic character that people can often easily relate to, who is taken from
their own, mundane, normal world and plunged into a crazy or abnormal situation
or reality. The interest in the story of the everyman usually comes down to “what
would an average person do in this strange/terrible/tragic situation?” Often
they end up surrounding themselves with many stronger, talented and/or more interesting
characters to help them accomplish their goals.
My lead character Job in Sunlight fits the bill as Everyman. He’s
a cop trying to cope with the loss of his family in a world taken over by
monsters. He doesn’t have super-powers, he’s not the “chosen one,” he’s not an
antihero, etc. He’s just an average guy doing the best he can in taxing and
extraordinary circumstances. I do want my readers to
strongly relate to him. Likewise with Job, as I develop him further in my
rewrites I hope to make him seem real, unique, likeable, etc. But he’ll still
be an “everyman.”
Some of my favorite
fictional literary and film “everyman” characters:
• Rick Grimes, from the Walking Dead series. (And just about
every lead in every zombie story starting with Romero’s The Night of the Living Dead.) I have to say, I don’t really “like”
Rick, but I can always relate to him.
• Sherriff Brody from Jaws
• Arthur Dent from HitchHiker’s Guide…
• Peter Parker (when not Spider-Man)
• The Man and The Boy from
McCarthy’s The Road. (Very generic but relatable characters.)
• Mario from Nintendo Games
(and just about every main character from any first person-shooter game)
• Frodo, from Tolkien’s Lord of the Rings might qualify as an
everyman, too… despite being a Hobbit, even though he’s also the chosen ring
bearer. He starts the story living in a hole in the ground, afraid of
adventure. Compared to his other companions in the Fellowship, his
extraordinary/awesome levels aren’t that impressive. He’s got his own skills,
but he’ll never face down a Balrog on his own.
More specifically the
conversation in our writing group focused a bit more on women characters. Do female
characters all have to be special, unique, more than just your run-of-the-mill
person to be a worthwhile/interesting character? Can they be a good character
without being “awesome”?
Maybe. I’d like to believe
there is room in fiction writing for the “Everywoman” character, too. I tried
doing a Google search on this concept, of an “everywoman” character, and I didn’t
find much information at all. I did find this posting on the everywoman that I though raised some good points, especially “Why is there only “room” for “extraordinary”
women?” in literature.
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Images of the “average woman” from various
countries,
created from hundreds of pictures of women from all over the world.
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Although I haven’t read Stephanie
Meyer's vampire-romance Twilight
books (and don’t intend to, it’s just not my thing—and the movies fill me with
a vague sense of nausea and sadness for sparkly vampires… I can't watch
them, either) from what I know of the stories, my gut instinct was that the
main female character “Bella” is an “everywoman.” This post on the “everygirl,”
(also nicely done), confirms this idea, and also lists some other great
examples of the “everywoman” in literature.
So after thinking more
about this, I do think there’s room for the Everyman or Everywoman in your
story, depending on what that story is. If you are looking for a way for people
to relate and sympathize with your main characters, especially if the world you’re
creating is crazy/dangerous/abnormal it can be a great way to go.
But--don’t be afraid to
bring the awesome. If it’s there in your character, let it out on the page.
Mark
@manowords
(Source for the "Average Woman" photo article linked above)
